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Underworld- Working title

Jack the lad

Established Member
I arranged a shoot this last weekend with the working title "Underworld". We used this movie and others as a visual reference in the planning stage.

Oh and feel free to RIA

#1


One by Ashley Daws aka North of Auckland, on Flickr

#2


. by Ashley Daws aka North of Auckland, on Flickr

#3


Ravage by Ashley Daws aka North of Auckland, on Flickr

#4


Pain by Ashley Daws aka North of Auckland, on Flickr

#5


Untitled by Ashley Daws aka North of Auckland, on Flickr

#6


Untitled by Ashley Daws aka North of Auckland, on Flickr
 
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nikonuser11

Distinguished Member
nice set:smashin:

if I can critique (you did say RIA):rolleyes:

#1 doesnt work IMO due to the 'credibility' factor ie they are obviously staged as they are coming from just in front of a brick wall as opposed to coming through a large entrance or just a lot further away from the wall.
#3 and #4 also suffers from similar as he just doesnt have a scared enough expression in that scenario.
#7 and#13 have the right expressions and work very well:smashin:
also love #8 and #11 for the image and lighting and atmosphere conveyed:thumbsup:

thanks for sharing
 

shotokan101

Banned
Thes e don't quite work for me I'm afraid - don't know if it's the "Staged" nature or that a couple look like Male/Female Perfume Adverts ("Blood For Women" Perhaps ? :rolleyes:) but the just don't sorry :(

Jim
 

Jack the lad

Established Member
nice set:smashin:

if I can critique (you did say RIA):rolleyes:

#1 doesnt work IMO due to the 'credibility' factor ie they are obviously staged as they are coming from just in front of a brick wall as opposed to coming through a large entrance or just a lot further away from the wall.
#3 and #4 also suffers from similar as he just doesnt have a scared enough expression in that scenario.
#7 and#13 have the right expressions and work very well:smashin:
also love #8 and #11 for the image and lighting and atmosphere conveyed:thumbsup:

thanks for sharing

I think you are spot on there :smashin:
Thes e don't quite work for me I'm afraid - don't know if it's the "Staged" nature or that a couple look like Male/Female Perfume Adverts ("Blood For Women" Perhaps ? :rolleyes:) but the just don't sorry :(

Jim

It's all good Jim, no need to apologise, it's art and it works for some and not others. Also it's a bloody big learning curve this photography thing, I took my first people photo almost a year ago now and had a strobe or two for 3 months so I will make mistakes (I'll learn from them though :D). I have another 2 shoots planned for the New Year and I'll put the ^^^^^ comments to good use.

Cheers for the feedback fellas :smashin:
 

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