serpico77
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I recently started to write poems on how I was feeling or how people feel in life when times are hard. The poems help me express how I feel.
Some are sad and others are happy or about every day life.
I would like to know how I could improve my poems and if they are of any good.
See poem below
Lost in the crowd
Nowhere to be found
Can nobody see me
Can nobody hear me
Feeling so down
Handful to swallow
Slowly drifting away
Too late to turn back
What have I done
What have I left behind
Im sorry if you cared
Too late to turn back
Hope you enjoy!!
Some are sad and others are happy or about every day life.
I would like to know how I could improve my poems and if they are of any good.
See poem below
Lost in the crowd
Nowhere to be found
Can nobody see me
Can nobody hear me
Feeling so down
Handful to swallow
Slowly drifting away
Too late to turn back
What have I done
What have I left behind
Im sorry if you cared
Too late to turn back
Hope you enjoy!!
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