Help. Whats wrong with my Horror short-film?

[shanz32]

Heres a film made by a group of friends. It is for a competetion where we had to make a 5 minute movie in 5 days.

Why does it keep gettibng negative feedback? We worked so hard on it!

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[Ian J]

If you're getting negative feedback you obviously know why people don't like it but I'm afrid that I have removed the link as AV Forums isn't a link farm

 

[johntheexpat]

Dear AVF ers. IMO this is nothing more than attempt to get more hits on his 'short film'
The comments on YT aren't all that bad, (unlike the film) and the comments already there actually sum up why its not worth 5 minutes of your time reviewing it. But if you have the time, you could be nice to a newbie, but if I had the choice, I would go back in time 10 minutes and play a game of spider solitaire instead. Hindsight is wonderful.

 

[shanz32]

I apologise for posting a link. I was only looking for feedback as this is my first attempt at horror. You may close this thread if you want. Sorry for any inconvience caused.