Poses look a little awkward in both. First shot looks as though it also has a very slight amount of motion blur and looks a little soft. Are they strobe shots or using continuous lighting?
using continuos lighting.Had to change the setting on it half way throw the shoot thought something was not right when i was checking images back.But thanks for the feedback help me out on the next shoot
Just looked through some of your portrait shots on Flickr. Who is Megan? Is she used to being in front of the Camera? If not, then she has done well.
You have some great poses, with the softness and skin tones letting them down.
Thanks Doug yeah she a professional model going to use tripod on my next shoot next week.Will take that on board about my jpg compression see what i can do about that.Still working on my editing skills and so on.