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Behind the scenes

Discussion in 'Past Entries' started by busterbenny2001, Jan 22, 2018.

  1. busterbenny2001

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    Tavistock beautiful market town, took the kids for a walk yesterday in the dank weather and took a few roads we don’t normal travel down, the bleaker side of Tavistock!!

    Taken on my iPhone 8 just selected black and white before taking, go easy on me lol it’s the taking part that counts !!!

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    behind the scenes
    by tavibaker, on Flickr
     
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    Nice enough pic. In terms of composition it's a bit tight at the bottom, and the focal point is a bit too central for me, but overall good effort :smashin:
     
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    Thanks, I’m going to take camera with me next time and try the shot with your suggestions, keen to improve
     
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    TBH it just preference not right or wrong :smashin:
     
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    I agree about the tight composition - also try a little lower viewpoint and shift a few feet to the left :)
     
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    Not sure it can be saved, tbh :) But beside the sentiment, I think it's a decent effort. And welcome to the competition.
     

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