first portrait shoot with my wife

jonneymendoza · 04-08-2012, 12:31 AM

Hi. please critique my portrait shoot attempted on my wife i done today.

i used off camera flash on some of these pics

IMG_0373-2.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr

IMG_0368-2.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr

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IMG_0326.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr
IMG_0317.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr

IMG_0375-2.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr

im a portrait noob but have been practicing it via my 100 strangers project

shotokan101 · 04-08-2012, 12:55 AM

I think if you're after feedback then numbering the shots will help

Clown · 04-08-2012, 8:00 AM

Numbering shots will only help the old people who forget where they are

I wouldn't have put the third one in. The 4th one is just crying out for a more 'reserved' or 'calm' pose in that lovely light. Maybe a bit Ksanti style from the other forum?

jonneymendoza · 04-08-2012, 1:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Clown

Numbering shots will only help the old people who forget where they are

I wouldn't have put the third one in. The 4th one is just crying out for a more 'reserved' or 'calm' pose in that lovely light. Maybe a bit Ksanti style from the other forum?

Ksanti?what's that?

Clown · 04-08-2012, 7:34 PM

A user on the other side

Darthchaffinch · 04-08-2012, 8:44 PM

Prefer her expressions in 2 & 3, but her shoulder maybe a tad overexposed in 2 and she's too central maybe in 3 for me? Lovely set though!

Gordon @ Convergent AV · 10-08-2012, 8:20 PM

i love the light and tones in number 4

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shotokan101 Preeminent Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Glasgow Thanks: Gave 6,570, Got 9,811 Posts: 47,199	I think if you're after feedback then numbering the shots will help
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Clown Restricted Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: London Thanks: Gave 76, Got 61 Posts: 524	Numbering shots will only help the old people who forget where they are I wouldn't have put the third one in. The 4th one is just crying out for a more 'reserved' or 'calm' pose in that lovely light. Maybe a bit Ksanti style from the other forum?
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Clown Restricted Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: London Thanks: Gave 76, Got 61 Posts: 524	A user on the other side
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Darthchaffinch Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Thanks: Gave 649, Got 419 Posts: 1,646	Prefer her expressions in 2 & 3, but her shoulder maybe a tad overexposed in 2 and she's too central maybe in 3 for me? Lovely set though!
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