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first portrait shoot with my wife

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Old 04-08-2012, 12:31 AM   #1
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first portrait shoot with my wife

Hi. please critique my portrait shoot attempted on my wife i done today.

i used off camera flash on some of these pics


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IMG_0326.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr
IMG_0317.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr

IMG_0375-2.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr

im a portrait noob but have been practicing it via my 100 strangers project

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I think if you're after feedback then numbering the shots will help
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Numbering shots will only help the old people who forget where they are

I wouldn't have put the third one in. The 4th one is just crying out for a more 'reserved' or 'calm' pose in that lovely light. Maybe a bit Ksanti style from the other forum?
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Numbering shots will only help the old people who forget where they are

I wouldn't have put the third one in. The 4th one is just crying out for a more 'reserved' or 'calm' pose in that lovely light. Maybe a bit Ksanti style from the other forum?
Ksanti?what's that?
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Prefer her expressions in 2 & 3, but her shoulder maybe a tad overexposed in 2 and she's too central maybe in 3 for me? Lovely set though!
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i love the light and tones in number 4
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