[chaz 2112]

All c&c welcome.

[Tobers]

Hmmm...

Nice twinkly light on the water. You've got the right idea to try and frame them using the reeds and throwing them out of focus.

However, the light is on the wrong side so the bits of swan facing the camera are in shadow, and the reeds that go in front of the swans are a bit distracting.

[chaz 2112]

Yeah i was always on the wrong side of the sun,kept thinking that as i took them, but it's a big lake and the swans stayed that side for a couple of hours.